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第六周英语学科中心活动内容

罗淮 2019/4/10 10:08:41 点击113次

  

2019/3/27

主讲人

丁洁

参加人员

全体英语教师

   

宏基报告厅

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

活动议程 (一)讲座主题:找寻英语写作进阶之门的钥匙

一、展示了《江苏省考试说明》书面表达的四个示例。

二、实例展示和详解

实例12019年苏锡常一模作文:

实例2:学生初稿Just as the picture shows vividly, a man sits in front of the computer whenever he works, stays at home or plays, not knowing what has happened outside. He even can't get rid of computers in his dream.

语言打磨后指导稿Just as the picture shows vividly, in front of the computer sits a man who is absorbed in it whether at work, at home or in play, overlooking the outside world completely. Eventually, he even can't get rid of the fantasy of using the computer in his dream.

实例32019 南京、盐城一模英语作文:

学生初稿

Sports classes are ignored though they are very important.

语言打磨后指导稿

Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily left ignored in middle schools.

实例4:  1) 话题归类,词块、语块积累 2)家庭教育类

话题词块的积累:

1. weaken children's creativity and imagination

2. pose a threat to the cultivation of communicative ability

3. confine ...to...

4. deprive... of...      

5. set their minds free

deprive them of the freedom to set their minds free

6. be subjected to

7. obedient and mediocre

一、话题归类,词块、语块积累

1) 社交词块:socialize, contact, emotional ties/ bonds, gap, alienate A  from B, isolate, fit in, be left out otherwise

二、学生习作的打磨

素颜版:

A girl in Chinese costume stands in the sunshine. She smiles.

裸装版:

There is an American girl standing in the sunshine and giving us a sweet smile. 

淡妆版:

In the sunshine stands a girl in Chinese costume, wearing necklace and ribbon, with a smile on her face.

微整版:

In the sunshine graciously stands a pretty girl in traditional Chinese costume, wearing necklace and the like, with a smile on her face.

三、逆向思维之训练

四、总结

句意内容明确化

复杂句意简单化

简单句意英语化

简单英语复杂化

 

 

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